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Old 02-26-2005, 05:00 PM
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Default poem I wrote.

hey, this poem still isn't finished, maybe one day it will be tho.
But tell me what you think so far.

Its funny how the world keeps turning
Eventho my heart is still burning
What did he do to deserve it
What did he do to end up in this shit
It was not fair to let him die
I cry at night as I ask to the sky,WHY?
I sit in solom and wait for an answer
While the question is eating me like cancer
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Old 02-26-2005, 10:18 PM
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Very awesome. I can tell it is from your heart.
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