Welcome to the Prison Talk Online Community! Take a Minute and Sign Up Today!






Go Back   Prison Talk > BREAK TIME > Poetry
Register Entertainment FAQ Calendar Mark Forums Read

Notices

Poetry Share your original poems here.

Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
  #1  
Old 06-01-2003, 03:05 PM
Durantschick Durantschick is offline
Registered User
 

Join Date: May 2003
Location: new york
Posts: 139
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Default Who Else Loves For These Reasons

I LOVE YOU

I LOVE YOU
BECAUSE
YOU MAKE ME HAPPY
I LOVE YOU
BECAUSE
YOU MAKE ME FEEL FREE
I LOVE YOU
BECAUSE
YOU'RE DIFFERENT
I LOVE YOU
BECAUSE
YOU CHOSE ME
I LOVE YOU
BECAUSE
YOU MAKE ME SMILE
I LOVE YOU
BECAUSE
YOU LISTEN
I LOVE YOU
BECAUSE
YOU'RE A PART OF MY LIFE
I LOVE YOU
BECAUSE
YOU SET ME STRAIGHT
I LOVE YOU
BECAUSE
LOVING YOU IS GREAT![u]
Reply With Quote
Sponsored Links
  #2  
Old 06-22-2003, 11:53 PM
Durantschick Durantschick is offline
Registered User
 

Join Date: May 2003
Location: new york
Posts: 139
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Default

i really would like to hear anyone's reply, if its not too much of a bother
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 06-23-2003, 09:09 AM
lulu's Avatar
lulu lulu is offline
Been here forever
 

Join Date: Mar 2002
Location: Tx.
Posts: 9,896
Thanks: 0
Thanked 228 Times in 19 Posts
Default

I jus tnow saw this, and i love it. reminds me of my baby and i
__________________
many hugs
lulu
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 10-07-2003, 11:23 PM
Durantschick Durantschick is offline
Registered User
 

Join Date: May 2003
Location: new york
Posts: 139
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Default

thanks
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 10-08-2003, 07:32 AM
lulu's Avatar
lulu lulu is offline
Been here forever
 

Join Date: Mar 2002
Location: Tx.
Posts: 9,896
Thanks: 0
Thanked 228 Times in 19 Posts
Default

yur more then welcome
__________________
many hugs
lulu
Reply With Quote
  #6  
Old 10-08-2003, 12:00 PM
RAM's Avatar
RAM RAM is offline
Neveragain
 

Join Date: May 2003
Location: US
Posts: 1,104
Thanks: 0
Thanked 4 Times in 3 Posts
Default

Well put, did you write that yourself?
Thanks for sharing!
__________________
LOVING MY FAMILY
Reply With Quote
  #7  
Old 10-08-2003, 01:08 PM
BryansGRRL's Avatar
BryansGRRL BryansGRRL is offline
Wally~LOUD&Proud
 

Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Me:MI,HIM:PA
Posts: 1,553
Thanks: 0
Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post
Default

I like this very much also reminds me of Bryan and I ThX for sharing!
__________________
BRF~All my love,All my life DJF~My Brother My Blood You are NOT forgotten Morgaine14
Reply With Quote
  #8  
Old 10-08-2003, 06:06 PM
dandl dandl is offline
Registered User
 

Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: OH
Posts: 15
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Default

I really love all of your poems and they have all touched my heart and they also explain my feelings. I have tried to explain to my man that I love him so much it hurts, I just hope he understands what I'm saying.
__________________
Lorie Barney
I Love You, Barney!!
Reply With Quote
  #9  
Old 10-10-2003, 02:16 PM
tammybobswife's Avatar
tammybobswife tammybobswife is offline
MISSIN BOB
 

Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: PERU ILLINOIS usa
Posts: 161
Thanks: 7
Thanked 22 Times in 4 Posts
Default

wow another one that made my tears flow
__________________


Reply With Quote
  #10  
Old 10-14-2003, 11:15 AM
mamadukemook's Avatar
mamadukemook mamadukemook is offline
Registered User
 

Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: Philadelphia, PA
Posts: 266
Thanks: 0
Thanked 5 Times in 2 Posts
Default

oh i really like that, that was a great poem
__________________
Mrs. Bennett

<script language="JavaScript" src="http://webapps.nerdsonsite.com/utility/countdown.cgi?year=2006&month=6&day=23&offset=-12"></script> days until we will be together again, finally!

Phone calls for a month-$78.60
Round trip bus transportation for 1 day-$45
Letters per month-$40
Pictures per month-$20
The look on his face when we're together-Priceless
My Mastercard pays for it all
Reply With Quote
  #11  
Old 10-14-2003, 12:34 PM
shell021001's Avatar
shell021001 shell021001 is offline
He's Home!!! :0)
 

Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Manchester, MI USA
Posts: 895
Thanks: 202
Thanked 33 Times in 27 Posts
Default

This was beautiful. And says it just perfectly. And every word of it the truth!!

Michelle
__________________
It ain't over until the fat lady sings..and I ain't singing s**t!!
Reply With Quote
  #12  
Old 11-13-2003, 03:29 PM
armandhammer armandhammer is offline
Registered User
 

Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: las vegas, nv
Posts: 12
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Thumbs up

i really think your poem is great, it also reminds me of my fiance and i.(infact to the tee).hang in there and keep smiling.
Reply With Quote
  #13  
Old 11-13-2003, 03:57 PM
KRIS_NC's Avatar
KRIS_NC KRIS_NC is offline
Banned
 

Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: ME AND TEE ARE BOTH IN NC
Posts: 5,723
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Default

THATS ME AND TERRANCE THANKS FOR SHARING
Reply With Quote
  #14  
Old 11-20-2003, 06:24 PM
nlifeone's Avatar
nlifeone nlifeone is offline
Registered User
 

Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: mississippi, USA
Posts: 90
Thanks: 0
Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
Default

THAT IS PRECIOUS! tHANK YOU.

AMP
__________________
You cannot find true love, where it does not exist,
You cannot hide it, where it truly does.

<center>
<img src="http://webzoom.freewebs.com/gilly_billy/pto/amp.jpg">
</center>
Reply With Quote
  #15  
Old 11-27-2003, 01:16 PM
dkr55 dkr55 is offline
Account Closed
 

Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: me-kentucky/him-indiana
Posts: 1,993
Thanks: 0
Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post
Default

THINK IT FITS MOST EVERYONE.
Reply With Quote
  #16  
Old 12-15-2003, 06:50 PM
Durantschick Durantschick is offline
Registered User
 

Join Date: May 2003
Location: new york
Posts: 139
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Default

thank you all, for your replies
Reply With Quote
  #17  
Old 12-15-2003, 07:08 PM
SFC SFC is offline
Registered User
 

Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: FLORIDA
Posts: 399
Thanks: 0
Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
Default

Thanks for sharing, this was beautiful.
Reply With Quote
  #18  
Old 12-16-2003, 06:51 PM
bebe_loves1 bebe_loves1 is offline
Registered User
 

Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: queens n.y
Posts: 34
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Default

cute....gotta love it....
__________________
"Lady Camil"
"Await True Love"
Reply With Quote
  #19  
Old 12-18-2003, 01:43 PM
Niightdrmr's Avatar
Niightdrmr Niightdrmr is offline
Making US stronger!!
Donation Award 
 

Join Date: Sep 2002
Location: North Carolina
Posts: 2,463
Thanks: 0
Thanked 40 Times in 33 Posts
Default NICE

Very nice!!
__________________
Quote:
They can have their bodies ~ We got their hearts!!!
Reply With Quote
  #20  
Old 12-18-2003, 07:58 PM
QUEENMIJA QUEENMIJA is offline
Registered User
 

Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: Washington USA
Posts: 38
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Default

I love that poem! Jose and I tell each other those words every time we talk or in a letter but not in poem form. I just might read that at my wedding.
Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump


All times are GMT -6. The time now is 12:05 PM.
Copyright © 2001- 2013 Prison Talk Online
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.7.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2013, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Website Design & Custom vBulletin Skins by: Relivo Media
Message Board Statistics