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Old 12-09-2003, 09:13 PM
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He wasn’t thinking right
When he got in his car that night
He didn’t think about what could happen
It all changed as quick as fingers snapping
They rolled up to the store
Two jumped out closed the door
They hid by the side
Waiting for the right time to run up inside
Black mask covering their faces
Rush of excitement – their heart races
They came running jumped n the car
They pealed out but didn’t get very far
Lights were flashing they heard the shrines shout
They got pulled over – told to get out
The car was searched guns were found
“You’re going in” the policeman’s voice was the only sound
2 days in one broke the silence trying to get him a deal
He told about another night “we ran in & he was at the wheel “
He had a public defender that told him to plead guilty or he could get 30 years
2 counts of armed robbery – being away from his kids – he was facing his biggest fears
standing in front of the judge he knew made a big mistake
now the next 20 years of his life they’re going to take
If only he thought it through realized something could go wrong
Now in prison he sits trying to be strong
789 miles away from his family and friends
wondering who will be there when this all come to an end
tears falling when he hears “daddy when are you coming home”
cherishing every letter & every minute on the phone
good behavior & classes trying to get his time cut down
getting his life together both feet on the ground
calling 10 lawyers every week
hoping something good one will speak
writing a 4 page letter everyday
hoping to bring some happiness his way
crying inside missing him so much
traveling 12 ½ hours to feel his touch
when we finally awake from this nightmare
a beautiful life he and I will share
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Old 12-10-2003, 08:45 AM
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wow... tht was great.. Thanks for sharing.
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Old 12-10-2003, 01:24 PM
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That was a amazing poem you got much talent..... that how the sh*t goes down its real
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Old 12-10-2003, 03:59 PM
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Thanks you - this poem is how it really happened - I have sent it to my guy yet I'm not sure how he'd react.
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Old 12-10-2003, 04:01 PM
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Yes thank you for sharing all i can say is WOW!
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Old 12-11-2003, 09:03 AM
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That was really great! You have a great talent as well...Thanks for sharing that with us.
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Old 12-11-2003, 09:52 AM
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Do you ladies and gentlemen think I should send this to him - I haven't yet I'm not sure how he'll react - I mean he loves my poems - usually they're of a different nature but I don' t know if this one is too deep N' personal
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Old 12-11-2003, 08:47 PM
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Yes DGIRL i really think you should send him this poem you got much talent and this poem would really give him something to think about. It would show how much time and how much thought you put into this im sure he will like it!!!!
I hope things go good when your man finally touches down and goes home mine will be home soon so i am really happy....god bless you.. And alwayz remember dont let know one get you down.........TRUE LOVE CAN WAIT.....
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Old 12-11-2003, 09:12 PM
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Thank you soo much - I editied this cut out all the parts about my friends n' family not understanding because I didn't want him to know all of that - so I guess my heart wanted this to go to him.
I wish you the best too.
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Old 12-11-2003, 09:17 PM
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Love the poem it touched me
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thank you - I hope my baby feels the same way when he gets it tuesday.... I'm crossing my fingers
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Old 12-26-2003, 09:35 PM
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I just wanted to let you all know that I sent D this poem and he told me it really touched his heart and made a couple of tears fall. He told me that it made him realize just how much he is on my mind and how strong our bond is and deep are feeling go. Thanks for the encouragement to sent it.
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Old 12-28-2003, 12:30 AM
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omgosh this poem really hits home.. I loved it.. you have a great talent!!!

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Old 12-28-2003, 02:43 PM
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thank you! It's my hobby I like to write poems to express how I'm feeling
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I write poems but have never been able to write one telling him how I feel and reassuring him Im here and its real...........keep up the writting
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Old 03-29-2004, 06:26 PM
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Thank you, for some reason I have always turn to poetry to express how i feel from love to hate I even have some "x-rated" stuff.
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Well, I admit you have Very good talent. I also Write I have had many published, So Really good luck with that and i let my boyfriends Mother read what you wrote it touched her in many ways and she cried Im going through a tough time to and i would like to share a little in what i wrote. Im New to this so im not sure about making a thread or so on so maybe in the End you'll can help me out... Here i will share with you what i wrote. This is not a poem just some feelings i had...

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Tossin and turning with Only Bad Dreams No one to Hold me and tell me hes is alright.Constantly wondering if He is thinkin of me, Wanting him to be Safe is the First thing on my mind, Not Having him with me tares me up inside,But i know if I hold on We Can Do anything To make this last. Not seein him when I want Frusterates me, much less makes me mad, Not being able to look at him in the eyes when we are laying by eachothers sides, makes me wanna break down and cry,Looking at his pictures makes me think long and hard but i think with no disappear,I try not to think of bad things like longer time or him leaving me, so i am going to kick that behind and reverse it into rewind, but he knows he has me waiting and caring on the outside. So that should mean a little Something....I know hes Disappointed in himself for what hes got himself into, but hes needs to look at the bright side of it,"It's better then so much more time. Truthfully I can't say i Know his pain because I don't. I may not live the life of a prisonor but i live a life with one, Because I decide to,"I seen the outside of the prison and i know its no fun, knowing theres Cells with bars connecting to walls which has him thinking probaby,"What Exactily is tomorrow going to Bring me!? Am i going to have a Good Day and No ones going start Crap with me or am i going to get in trouble for the littles things!?I guess I'm just gravated and sometimes don't know what to really think..... I Felt his Pain the Day Before Going to court, It's like I knew his thoughts on him going to prison or knew how it was going to be when he Got there, But i wouldn't Because I'm not the one Sitting behind Bars, I Knew it was going to be a Fear to him for even being there in the first place and his friends not being there for Him as support, and Then him thinking i wasn't going to be there, just tore me apart.But I Guess the best thing you could ever ask for in a friend or a Lover So much Family is when your in this preditment and Have Someone You Care or Love is locked away in a prison cell that's suposed to replace a place called home.Then many miles from his people is probaby often hard to deal with or to even think to himself,"Are they Even going to take the time to write or even send a card? or do they just tell themseleves,"Damn I Really Miss him." Or forget about him Because hes locked in the system...I'm Sure somedays hes okay and somedays he gets the blues. But i guess you Never Know until you walk in his shoes. I mean he knows he did wrong,"But Show him a little support to make him Get out and Do right to follow onto a Good well being Path Called Reality Life. I tell You The need to be Loved Goes way Deeper than self,More Important than any material Wealth. But You know Hes paying his Dues for his Crime So Don't Stop Loving him just because hes doing time,"So Write a letter or let a call go through just to let him know you care but Hearing blocks on phones from your Good friends is hurting but Life Goes on..."Whats really messed up is that he Was there for you when you was in some troubles or just needed a lift,"But when he Got locked away in a 6+12 cell and needs all the support he can get your not there,"Just because hes not around like he once was Don't mean hes not thinking of all the times he had with his friends or Don't have dreams he always had since he was a child to accomplish,"I guess it's like something suddenly lost And Couldn't feel it's touch, But theres things called stamps,pencils and paper that are used as tools, Some say theres a reason for not staying in touch, but I have looked and Searched and i couldn't find such, Theres no excuse to not be there for a friend who has always been there for you when you needed.....Sometimes at Night I Really think about this whole situation and think hes thinking fatefully to himself like hes being placed on a high book shelf from far ahead,"Because one day Each one of you will scan threw that book and will feel his Pain,So maybe one day when your just sitting around Get a stamp, pencil and paper and Write him a little something even if its just to say hello, Im sure it will be apprecitated....See Its all feelings,love,honor,pride, pain, emotions and hurting all inside him,"I hear it in his voice when i get his calls, It's like i feel his pain But i am Not his pain, But I'd rather be his Pain then see his pain. But i guess thats how living in prison for 11 months goes....Mistakes Are made and People learn from them If not the First time maybe the second of third time fourth time its just looking for Trouble....
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