My second poem. :] [LONELY WIFE.] i really hope u guys like it!

bnj112307 · #1 01-12-2009, 01:31 AM

LONELY WIFE.

i sit on my bed, with nothing to do.
i'd rather just lay here thinking of you.
i get so angry, and feel so alone.
i would do anything to have you home.
i start off my day rubbing my face.
thinking, without you, my life's a disgrace.
as i go on beginning my day.
i pray for sunshine to clear my gray.
i need motivation- what should i do?
i look to my left, & smile to the picture of you.
puffy-eyed, i smile, & continue my life.
because you are worth being a lonely wife.
it isn't about temptation, or having a lover.
don’t you see? i need you & no other.
the life of a gangster is about money, power & respect.
it's quite simple, you cross it & you will get checked.
although i'm no gangster, i know this first hand.
being married to you, i just grew to understand.
i am not proud of what you did, but i stand by your side.
because my word is priceless, and i'm down to ride.
inside, i go crazy! i pull my hair! i scream, i cry & just dont care!
outside, i 'm collected & i stay strong. i smile & act like nothing is wrong.
it's really confusing & hard to express,
the feelings i feel & all of my stress.
i hate the law & this corrupt city.
who would have thought this place be unpretty!
with all these emotions running through my head,
at the end of a weary day, it's hard to rest in bed.
but after it all, tears roll down my cheek.
i fall asleep, wake up, & press repeat.
with all this commotion, i brace myself.
& keep my cool, before i hurt my health.
on the bright side, of all this pain,
there is one thing i am sure to gain.
in about a year, i'm excited to say,
you will be out & well on your way...
into my arms, you'll find yourself to be.
it's me & you baby, against the world, FINALLY FREE.

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I LOVE YOU DADDY!!!

i hope you guys enjoyed it.
i really tried. lol.
thank you.

canthelpbutwait · #2 01-12-2009, 01:58 AM

i loved it

Great work.. you have talent.. keep um coming

& you should send um to ur man i bet hed like um

bambam618 · #3 01-25-2009, 11:19 PM

aww that's nice =] loved it

wilburgirl · #4 01-26-2009, 07:31 PM

i like your poem very much...thats how i feel too! THANKS for sharing it!

Ms.Magnolia · #5 01-30-2009, 12:57 AM

Your poem is really very good. You expressed alot of exactly how I feel.You're talented ! Keep writing - it's a good outlet for your emotions. At least that's how it is for me. Thanks for sharing with us !