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Old 05-09-2012, 06:56 PM
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So I'm no poet but I just started writing how I felt and this is what I got...

Sitting here once again just trying to get through the day, and it never gets any better it seems I always feel this way

Waiting on a phone call just to get me through, just "keep on keepin' on" that's all that I can do.

Letters back and forth they help to pass the time, until the day you come back to me, until the day your mine.

Even though there are no bars to hold me here like you, I'm serving a prison sentence and there's nothing I can do.

Im imprisoned in my mind, and my heart is locked away, waiting faithfully for release each and every day.

Tears run down my cheek when I picture you in that place and the last words we got to speak, and the look upon your face.

I remember the day you left me like it was yesterday I guess everyone makes mistakes and for these we all must pay.

Tell me sweetheart, are you coming home to me? Because this long road looks so foggy, I try hard but I can't see.

Everything's a struggle and every days so sad, please come home to me I need you here so bad.

I love you baby! 98 days and counting! <\3
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Old 05-09-2012, 09:50 PM
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For not being a poet this is great!!!
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Old 05-09-2012, 11:17 PM
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wow thats really sweet. I cant def relate to that.
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Old 05-11-2012, 11:26 PM
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Love it.. Shows ur true emotions amd some of what we r all going thru.. Great job

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Old 05-16-2012, 05:47 PM
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love it! truely how i feel at times.
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Love it. So much emotion.
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This one got me....;(

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Lovely poem. I like it
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