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Old 04-20-2012, 06:38 PM
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Ok this is my first poem please let me know what y'all think b4 I send it to my man. Thanks

This heart you hold in your hand I will give it to only one man
There are some things that you must know before I can truly let my heart
This heart you hold is more precious than gold
You see my heart is loving kind and very strong
And you are the reason it keeps beaten all day long
When all these guys say she'll never stay I'm here to promise you I will never stray
The heart you hold up in your hand remember I'll only give it to one man
When your days are long and you're nights are longer baby those bars in there are only making a stronger
Because That heart you hold up in your hand I will only give it to one man
You're going to feel my heart beatin so fast you're going to wonder can our love really
last
Just look at that heart you hold in your hand remember I will only give it to one man
So now that you understand and know I will give you my whole heart to hold
You have my whole heart we shall never part
Open your eyes can't you see
Baby it's only you that will ever hold me.

By Stacie Fernandez.

Hope y'all like it. Thanks
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Old 04-21-2012, 01:37 PM
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thumbs up.. great poem.. love it.. keep them coming this ones great.. thanks for sharing
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omg.... that just mad me cry, i love it wow
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Old 10-02-2012, 03:16 PM
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LOVE IT!!! I wish that I can write like that.
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